Taking Stock of your Work

This paper was not nearly one of my better works as I could not really come up with an idea to write about that I wanted to. But after I finished the draft and looked it over I think that I told the story of it pretty well. I think I used the quote that I had found really well and worded my introduction well too. But I think that I could have worded the body paragraphs a little bit better and possibly look more into how to use colons and semicolons. I came up with the idea for my essay because it directly had to do with me and how something affected me. I wrote my draft like I write any other paper: typing on my laptop because writing out an essay by hand never really works for me as well. After people corrected my draft paper I seen how much I really had to go over it and make it better. I really looked at what they corrected, figured that would help out that quiz grade. Next time I hope that I can really write about something that I want to write about and not have writers block about the topic.